(Camera on apartment room door.)
(Switch to doorknob, which turns. Door starts to open.)
(Switch to a 3/4 angle of door, opening closer to camera.)
(Payton walks out into hallway. Closes and locks door.)
(Payton walks out of shot in camera direction.)
(Switch to upper shot of Payton, moving along with him in front as he walks down the hall.)
(Jon walks by him. Payton does quick but not rushed glance at Jon, then looks forward.)
(Switch to outside of apartment door.)
(Payton walks out back apartment door. Starts walking to alleyway entrance.)
(Close up of Payton as he stops suddenly.)
(Switch to Kid [probably about 15-17 years old.] with box. Kid is staring at Payton.)
(Switch to previous shot. Payton stares back for four seconds, then walks past Kid out of alleyway.)
(Camera follows Payton sideview. He walks past apartment steps and down sidewalk.)
(Switch to end of sidewalk [crosswalk].)
(Payton walks into shot and stops.)
(Switch to behind Payton's head, slightly low-angle.)
(Payton's head turns slowly.)
(Switch to close-up side-view. Camera moves slightly ahead to show Kid standing with box, staring at Payton.)
(Switch to Payton's face. He stares for two seconds, then looks at light at other end of crosswalk. Crosses street out of shot.)
(Switch to view down the sidewalk about 115 feet away from previous point. Payton is about 17 feet away from camera, walking towards it.)
(Switch to sideview closer to building [see Payton and street]; follow Payton. He looks across the street while walking and sees Kid.)
(Switch to walkby view of Kid with box.)
(Switch back)
(Payton breaks into a jog as Kid is left behind out of the shot.)
(Switch to still front view of Payton, about 35 feet away.)
(Payton goes around corner in direction of shops.)
(Switch around corner.)
(Kid comes out of alleyway.)
(Switch to behind Payton.)
(Payton stops so as to not hit Kid. Lets out noise of surprise and refusal.)
(Switch to view street and other side.)
(Payton runs across street, almost gets hit by car. Makes it across.)
(Payton runs into store about four stores down.)
(Switch to inside of store on doorway. Payton runs in.)
(Payton stands, looks around, calms down.)
(View door from outside. Payton peeks out, sees no sign of Kid.)
(Payton cautiously walks out. Looks around again; no sign of Kid.)
(Payton walks down sidewalk. Almost to destination when he stops and looks quickly to side, seeing Kid.)
Payton: NO! (Runs past Kid and down sidewalk towards corner.)
(Turns around corner.)
(Switch to Payton's POV running down sidewalk. Arm sticks out of alleyway at last second.)
(Sideview shows Payton getting clotheslined. Hits sidewalk.)
(Switch to view of Payton's face. He's unconscious for a second, then opens his eyes slowly.)
(Switch to Kid standing above him. Kid reaches into box. Rustling.)
(Switch back. Payton looks more directly at Kid.)
(Switch again. Kid pulls out candy bar.)
(Switch again. Payton gets shocked look on face and tries to get up.)
(Switch. Kid lifts foot and forces Payton to ground with it.)
(Switch to Payton's face and chest [which has foot on it.])
(Switch to Kid.)
Kid: Look... just buy the freakin' candy bar. It's a dollar.
(Switch to Payton, view near sidewalk level and from streetside, slightly down angle from his face. [shows face and part of chest with Kid's leg.])
(Payton hesitates for two seconds, sighs, then looks down and reaches for pocket. Pulls out wallet and brings it by leg of Kid; opens it and pulls out dollar. Closes wallet, holds up dollar to Kid.)
(Switch to previous shot. Kid takes dollar, gives candy bar to Payton. Smiles, gets off of Payton.)
Payton: Thank you, have a good day. (Walks out of shot.)
(Switch to above shot of Payton lying on sidewalk [Head, torso, hip in shot]. He just sits there for three seconds; turns head slightly towards building. Gets up slowly, walks out of shot.)
(End scene.)
Okay. That's scene 2. Hope it works well from here. Peace.
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